Reviews For: On Your Mark pt.1

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Score: 10
suicidalsqueegee

"Incredible..."

date: April 5, 2007

Unbelievably good backgrounds - did you paint those then scan them? - good characters (like the whole "stereotypical race with added comptetition" thing), a nice amount of violence (some, but not OTT). Oh yeah, and it was lung-bustingly funny too! (paintbrush saw! :D LOL)
I bet the tortoise wins.

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Score: 10
cyberpotato

"dude you my fine sir...."

date: April 5, 2007

are a flash legend,a flash master and this flash is going straight on my favorite list

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Score: 8
Minty737

"ok.."

date: April 5, 2007

some good, some bad.

The backgroud animation was truly amazing, well done it lloks like a brush painting from RL. However the characters were quite simply drawn, and this looked very odd on a realistic background. The kangaroo barely looked any different from the hyena.

Animation effects were great! (birds flying past,looking at watch etc).

Storyliine- what storyline? honestly it was very hard to tell what was going on, even afer reading your notes on it. they say a picture can tell a thousand words, but i understood the story a lot better by reading your write up on it than by watching it! thast nto how its supposed to work.

Also, is there a quality changer? This is some high quality stuff, and potentially might not work on some comp.s.

Sound: was pretty basic, but i understand you trying to cut down the size. Lots of sounds were out of synch with the animation. By a long shot. Eg. the flying birds across the screen at intro.

It was quite violent for no apparent reason... and i didn't find it funny, so i gave you a lwo score there. the only reason your scoring high is because of the backgroud animation, which trumps everythign else.

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Score: 9
Darkside7000

"Wow..."

date: April 5, 2007

The animation in this was amazing, and the graphics were even better - especially the backgrounds! THEY LOOKED STUNNING! I wasn't quite sure what to expect as a whole though, but it was entertaining - good job!

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Score: 10
marioman-N64

"LOL"

date: April 5, 2007

danm you can draw. this realll funny and real artistick cant wait to see part 2.it was violent but not bloody(add alil more blood,if there was any)

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Score: 8
The-Yokai

"Nicely done!"

date: April 5, 2007

Very good, I want to see how it turns out. In some parts it was kinda like a twisted Disney movie, lol. The animation is excellent. Did you do the backgrounds yourself?
Overall, awesome!

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Score: 10
Aeroflame

"Wow..."

date: April 5, 2007

This is just amazing...
I loved all of it... the artwork was amazing, the humor was a little strange, but really good as well, and the intensity just before the race was amazing. I couldn't help but smile when I realized the bullet was going to hit the bird from in the beginning. I've watched it twice, and this is honestly the only movie on newgrounds that I can't find anything wrong with it. Although, the watch hands looks a bit wierd, but, seriously, that's nothing.

I'm really, really looking forward to part two.

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Score: 10
choopocobra

"brillant"

date: April 5, 2007

freaken awsome, the animation was great, right up there with bitty spiders....if thats there name well u will no who im talking about =P.great work

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Score: 9
phoenix042

"Awesome"

date: April 5, 2007

That was great, it was well done to say the least! I'm not sure why the random assortment of animals are racing but I'm curious to see it finished. I look forward to see the conclusion!

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Score: 10
P8NTB4LL3R

"Amazing!!!"

date: April 4, 2007

I'm giving it a 10 based on graphic detail alone. Very good work. Some of the sound didn't fit however. I doubt a paint brush flying through the air would sound like a chainsaw and the laugh for the hyena didn't sound quite right. I don't know maybe that's just how it sounds on my computer. But other wise a very good job. The portal needs more with your talent, keep it coming.

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