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Score: 4

"IT SUCK!!!!"

by: boodemon

date: March 12, 2007

ya it suck

maybe 'cauz i dont like serious video.......^^

Score: 10

"WOW And kind creepy"

by: Femora

date: March 12, 2007

Dang this is like a nightmare that could maybe hit the big screen, also the scary voice dark colors when the nightmare starts happening very nice 5/5

Score: 9

"eeps."

by: JamesFerg

date: March 12, 2007

Well that was significantly weird. The narration style you used was excellent as it really did sound like it was written by a kid (and to the last reviewer, it was supposed to you nong), which obviously made it horrifically more scary. As not only are you scared for yourself, you're horrendously scared for her. Those fairy's teeth were just evil.

*hides under pillow*

Score: 10

"ummmmmmmmm dur?"

by: carlosbarn

date: March 12, 2007

Maybe Idk... SHE IS 10 YEARS OLD?!?1? :P So she's telling her story the way it is :P. If you want to make it scarier though, maybe have a old woman or man speak about that girl who won't wake up and switch between the two narrators from what's going on inside and what's going on outside.

Score: 5

"creepy"

by: caseypants

date: March 12, 2007

that's some twiztid shit right there. it makes me wonder what the inspiration was behind it.

Score: 9

"It made me cry"

by: Fuko-san

date: March 11, 2007

It was touching. The sound effect in the backgorund of the machine that helped you breath was a very very nice touch. That made it very dramatic, even though it was skary, the fact that you could hear that made you realize that she was dieing. I just loved it!

Score: 10

"Wow"

by: gfys

date: March 11, 2007

That was positively awesome. One of the most moving things I've seen on NG in a while.

Score: 10

"this"

by: juliukz

date: March 11, 2007

is what art looks like.
to all the critics i'd liko to point out that idea and original concept is what counts. and his was one hell of an idea!!

i guess that this portal is to encourage people search for new forms, not to patronize old cliched flash works.

Score: 9

"will see"

by: DreamPhantom

date: March 11, 2007

I give you a nine most the video was given some higher quality from the voiceing. While the graphics weren't great there wasn't any real violence, interactivity or humor; the things it did have (Strong style and sound) went together very well giving it the creepy essence and intertainment value worthy of a good overall score.

Score: 9

"Yes!!"

by: CrimsonSadness

date: March 10, 2007

this was very cool, creepy... but that's a good thing! 9/10! Good work!