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Score: 6

"Visually Pleasing, Cool Concept, but..."

by: seventhstar

date: March 12, 2007

... dude, you need to spice up the writing a bit. I want to like this series, but it's making me yawn a bit. Ducks = cool. Nintendo = cool. But you're not playing the concept out very well.

Score: 7

"too boring"

by: ianer

date: March 12, 2007

i only watch this for the graphics and animation

Score: 10

"wow"

by: SirMan

date: March 12, 2007

you did a great job showing how made asian people sound when they talk... maybe a bit over-the-edge

Score: 10

"Good!"

by: Jdietz43

date: March 12, 2007

Animation was smooth and flawless. Angry chinese guy was odd, but funny at times. Assasination attempt is a weird twist, but makes for a good sequel. Ill be looking forward to the next part.

Score: 8

"Good, but story has too many unexplained parts"

by: zugdar

date: March 12, 2007

The quality was awesome as well as the soundtrack. It could use a little more story structure such as explaining the angry china man. A random plot twist at the end was too open as well. Hope it flows well with the upcoming episodes. Great job! Look forward to the next part.

Score: 10

"its sad you had to put that into 2 parts.."

by: bluedude05

date: March 12, 2007

* continuied review* But i liked it. I cant wait to see more!. teh assasination atempt seemed odd but ill let you explain it o me in later episodes. Keep up the good work.

Score: 10

"SICK YO"

by: windsorlive

date: March 12, 2007

Well this part you have outdone your self keep up the good work.

Score: 10

"Nice job..."

by: TheRicochet

date: March 12, 2007

Two thumbs up for the looks. Smooth animation and well-thought characters made this one (both pts A&B) a joy to watch. The pissed-of asian guy did'nt make any sense at all though. And LOVING it.

Waiting this to go on.
Respect.

Score: 9

"Excellent Episode"

by: ChrisC123

date: March 12, 2007

You have done very strong work here. The characters are detailed and unique, the premise is fantastic and the humor is clever. Great Job!

Score: 8

"Great, but short"

by: TheThing

date: March 11, 2007

This is a really great flash, and a great flash
series, and I hope it continues to get better in each
episode. It may seem as though I'm comparing you to
Brackenwood and others from Adam Phillips, But that's
because this could rival Brackenwood for the best
series on Newgrounds.

Graphics: Not much to say here, besides that it rival
Adam Phillips for the best art on Newgrounds! Every
thing is in great detail, from the people waiting in line at the store, to the feather's on Throwback's head,
it's well illustrated.

Animation: Great animation, although sometimes you
shirked on it, i.e. the explosion in the locker room; 20 grey "clouds" of smoke spinning isn't what I want to see in an explosion, or even a chimney. This isn't Sly Cooper. Other than that, though, it was smooth and fluent. I know that it's hard work to work on a flash, but
still, spend some time on making it as great as it can
be.

Sound: Good acting, but sometimes it could be hard to
hear Throwback because the recording was too soft. But
everything had great sound effects, and there was some
great music playing in the background, which fit each
mood perfectly.

Humor: Hilarious, from the cat (name has slipped my mind) removing the cat food from the kid, then eating it, to when the cat runs into the dumpster on his bike. This was a bit more funny than the other, but because of its shortness, there wasn't much to laugh to.

Great flash, just some work, and you'll be rocking it in the top 25. Just need a little more work, a little more effort, and you'll get there, I promise