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Score: 8

"Decent, but needs some work."

by: MarioKartFrantic

date: October 26, 2007

The random movements of the screen were very disruptive. Especially with the hammer. Try to reduce the amount of white around the edges of each scene, and then it will be better.

Score: 10

"Haha!"

by: DudeGoofyGuy

date: August 9, 2007

Hilarious!

Score: 6

"ruined"

by: Tails-Lock

date: August 2, 2007

it was funny, but you spoilt it by not making everything properly positioned.

Score: 6

"It's not that bad but it's not that great either"

by: rubix41

date: March 5, 2007

The major downfall is the gravelly sound in the beginning, peters out to better quality to the end, and the faint white lines around the screen. However, I liked the Sonic intro thing and the Powdered toast thing.

Score: 4

"Should at least do that much."

by: gate-into-blue

date: March 5, 2007

It's not like it involves particularly complicated animation, so i do think you should at least have that working properly, and not all jittery like. That said i highly approve of your 'powdered toast man' bit.

Score: 7

"ok"

by: Evilplatypus

date: March 5, 2007

not bad but notawesome. the sound clips vcary in volume which makes it harder to hear in parts and too loud in others.

Score: 6

"eh...."

by: Arklite

date: March 5, 2007

it wasnt bad persay, it was just barely midly funny. not bad usingt the ashfordpride formula but you need to choose better sound clips and work on the syncing

Score: 4

"Not good, but not bad."

by: Capthavic

date: March 5, 2007

Nice try but not quite there. The audio and editing were a little rough imo. It was kinda amusing but just didn't make me laugh like other similar submissions. Keep it up and I hope my input has helped.

Score: 6

"Honest try, I can see that."

by: Xenolord

date: March 5, 2007

I see you gave an honest try, and for that, I respect you. I won't lie though. I didn't like it. But I didn't hate it either. The sounds were good, the sprits.... You can probably guess what I'm going to say here. ANYWAYS, it was a very valient try. My suggestions, look over what you've got and re-sync everything. I don't know if you use SWiSH like me, or Flash MX, but if you use SWiSH, I can help you with the sync and jumpy-ness of the sprites. Keep up the good work. And remember. You can only go up from here.

Score: 4

"Meh."

by: XenonOSX

date: March 4, 2007

Didn't like it as much as I thought I would, that being that I didn't really like it at all. Show potential.