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Score: 10

"KickAss!!!!!!!!!!"

by: Chentinela

date: May 2, 2008

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jeje just kiding any way keep up with the good work

Score: 7

"DUDERS ROCK"

by: GunmanClock

date: July 15, 2007

also, do u play lineage 2, because there was a soulshot sound when he falls LOL

Score: 7

"enjoyable watch, though"

by: Bezman

date: April 8, 2007

I liked the way you just threw us straight into the animation without an 'intro'.

I didn't feel the art was a massive step up. Your hands were better and the sleeveless duder's lineless arms are definitely a nicer style. But it's only evolved as I'd hope to see over the course of a beginner's series. Hardly cause for a massive celebration.

I felt the backgrounds were a massive step up - nothing stood out as pretty and nothing complex was there to challenge you, but compared to last time - where elements of the barn stood out as ugly - it's a big improvement.

My only criticism graphically was the end-screen with the slightly sloppy white 'highlight' lines on the spiky thing.

Suggestions would be to try giving the guys shading, maybe try removing thin lines altogether... the usual. Experiment and continue trying out new styles until you decide on what works best for you.

The boobies made me smile.

The repeated breaks to flash up a word or two made me chuckle. I think you could have gone further, maybe repeating that joke a couple more times, to get it even more ridiculous.

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Anyway, it was an enjoyable watch, though not quite as chucklesome as its predecessor. No real flaws, but the repeating flashing words just weren't as funny as the emo glasses.

Score: 5

"K"

by: milinko959

date: April 5, 2007

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics are slightly better in this episode. Decent voice acting as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A whole episode dedicated to the slight improvement of the graphics? I'm not sure they are even a whole lot different, but whatever. I wasn't too entertained by this for that reason, I think you should have worked a little more and had an actual storyline.

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Score: 5

"Better already"

by: Coop83

date: April 4, 2007

This has proven everything I wrote in my last review... well, except for the plot thing, but this was only a short.

The graphics have improved and so has the sound (although no bad guy this time) I guess the next step is to make a longer movie, possibly in a series? Would you be willing to give us that gratification?

Still, keep on improving and good luck with your next project

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Score: 9

"Sweet work!"

by: Abyssus

date: April 2, 2007

I love the way you have used this flash as a way to show off your skills, and the way you make the characters aware of the actual flash.
The main reason I liked it was the boldness, the way it just came out with the jokes and didn;t give you time to stop laughing beofre the next one.

I look foward to the full improved episode-
*Review Request Club*

Score: 8

"Great job."

by: Jacklus

date: February 22, 2007

Its a great job you did hear, not as good as the other one but i guess your learning. It was a little short tho so try to lengthen it :)

Score: 7

"Sigh"

by: MetalFish

date: February 19, 2007

was good but kinda ruins it when the characters talk about the creater of the flash. LOL loved the Sparkles part

Score: 7

"Seemed pointless"

by: 2good2b4goten

date: February 19, 2007

Sure it was pointless, but it was funny at the same time... don't worry that's a good thing. The humor was great, right from the get-go you had me laughing.

The visuals were nice, the animation was fluent... overall this made a great flash cartoon. Kudo's on the voice acting too.

Good job!

Score: 8

"nice"

by: TheNintenDuder

date: February 18, 2007

that movie was pretty funny it was a well done movie so i think it diserves a 5..... if it could go higher 6