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For starters, the animation (especially the awesome 3D building at the beginning) is top notch - save for the characters and their mouths, that didn't look quite as good as their surroundings. The music used was very good for an independently-produced score, and the dialog was so cheesy it's impossible to take it seriously - but I believe thats a point.

4/5 - it would have been a 5 had the characters been more detailed and the storyline a little more latching. Excellent work.

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Score: 8

"Nice"

by: Kintrada

date: July 27, 2007

I especially liked the animation in particualr that Laser (i think) shot in the end
and the roclet launch

Backgrounds could use a little touching up though...

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Score: 6

"Hmmm...."

by: X0MBiiEGuY

date: July 21, 2007

The main menu and animation looked beautiful, the way at the beginning how everything seemed to move and come to life was great, i just wasnt expecting the people to not look all that good, im not sure who was in charge of art for the characters, but everything was out of proportion, and did look nearly as exiting as the environments and technical stuff used for the opening sequence and main menu. still, it may be because im a huge anti anime kind of guy, but i thought the voice acting and dialogue was kind of corny. id usually say things like i wouldn't expect much from a flash movie, but ive seen better, i still think it should turn out great if the voices and art for the people change. plus i understand how annoying flash can be to have to work with, and the temptations of trying to hurry things up and get it over with. but despite my harsh criticism you can believe me when i say, im on your side. >:)

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Score: 8

"^_^ Nice"

by: LadyKisaragi

date: June 11, 2007

The 3-d like view at the beginning was awesome. =3 Your backgrounds are pretty good, though your characters still seem a bit stiff though

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Score: 8

"Nicely Put Together"

by: piccolo32

date: February 8, 2007

Nice work on the first chapter seems that you know your way around flash pretty well I may have to get you to teach me a few tricks. Anywho as for the story as it is a prologue and the main story is yet to come it was fairly light on action and all that Jazz but still gives you a few hints as to whats to come. Once again nice work on the animation and congrats on the daily second place.

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Score: 6

"interesting but..."

by: bluedude05

date: February 7, 2007

Ive never been one to get on people about there animation style but you cut alot of corners when it came to actual lip movements which basically underminded your art style. In english .. you have to show us some lip moevments.

It was ok script wise and teh story fell into place nicely, but it felt that things started to happn a bit to fast and sudden.For example the company president guy dieing then teh dude who was agenst what he was doing for teh company being incharge... all too sudden i didnt even get the feeling that he had something to do woth his, the presidents, sudden death. Which leads to another point give people names please. If i had to guess at what type of story telling you wher going for I would gues it was someting close to 24 *the tv series* but i couldnt fall in love with it.

Overall work on jsut a litle bit of lip movement while talking, and try to find a way to have thing s happen without them being so sudden.
Ps if they had names sorry i must have missed them...