Score: 8
"simple concept made very pretty"
date: December 8, 2002
What pretty art. I wish everyone stylized their work this much. You can tell it's a very personal way of drawing. The cartoon itself is maybe just a bit too long - that is, too slow. Since it's about such a simple thing, I don't think it should last longer than 15 seconds or so. And the credits could all fit on one screen - nobody likes to watch long credits sequences, unless the credits are doing something entertaining (for example, the cartoon "Headache" that's posted elsewhere on NG).