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Score: 8

"Big improvement--some tweaking would go a long way"

by: Skaijo

date: January 10, 2007

I watched this about three times, once without any sound. Afterwards, I waited about a day and then watched the first episode only to come back and watch this one over again.

I've got to say it there's a huge improvement over ep. 1.

+ I love the fact that the spotlight follows the Mike across the screen. It's movement could be delayed a bit more. Still, it's a very nice touch. For the future, I'd like to see the spotlight actually be a radial with transparent edges rather than a huge translucent disk. You may also want to try adding a shadow to the back wall.

- It's a bit short. I'd suggest saving these up a bit more until you've got a solid minute and a half before submitting it. It's kind of hard to enjoy great stand up a few jokes at a time.

+/- I liked the tweened movement--but it also comes off to making the character look flat and stiff. If you changed your symbols for your arms and legs much like you have for the mouth and eyes, you can give more range to the types of movements your character can have.

+ I liked the facial hair--you don't look like a 16 year old anymore. xD

Score: 10

"Needs to be longer!!!"

by: eastender

date: December 29, 2006

This had some really good graphics. The only problem was it was too short. But other than that, this is great.

Score: 8

"Funny"

by: fxwebmaster

date: December 29, 2006

This was really funny. The only thing that would make it better iis if it were longer.

Score: 8

"It was pretty good"

by: mademoiselle

date: December 29, 2006

I didn't really think that the comedy aspect of it was really funny. It was a little... dry maybe. I'd try to go for something more unexpected.
The drawings however were very good, although there could have been more variety other than that one scene.

Score: 7

"one problem"

by: Azraeldrah

date: December 29, 2006

it wasnt particularly funny, though graphics and sound quality were pretty good.

Score: 2

"Wow"

by: Hycran

date: December 29, 2006

I pray to god on high that that was not YOUR material. You needed to use laugh tracks because no one in their right mind would laugh at that horrid material. The graphics were good and the clarity was there, but the entire heart of the flash (the comedy) belonged in 1983, when making jokes about the DMV was funny.
Get some new material, and get some up to date material. Fortunately for you, half the people on this website will see "OLD PEOPLE" and will laugh their asses off and pass your movie. Unfortunately, a high score will not validate your lack of humour and delivery.
If you make more of these, PLEASE, make them remotely funny/edgy/interesting, any of those 3 will do.
good day sir