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Score: 6

"Winking Thinking"

by: Rantdog

date: September 7, 2006

Nice, subtle idea. Abstract and kinda of funny at the same time. You have a good sense of mischief and the absurd. Enjoyed your thinking.

For your next toon, maybe get someone to help with the sound. It was very muddy. Your animation style needs a little more personal flair. I'm sure that wiill come with time and effort.

Concentrate on your strong suit - storytelling. Your main cosmic moose character has great potential.

Score: 7

"oooo"

by: krulz133

date: September 7, 2006

Pretty good, that =) nicely drawn and kinda funny =P

[your preloader doesn't work properly, btw.]

Score: 7

"I loved it!"

by: apsham

date: September 7, 2006

That was very nicely done for a second attempt, I do hope that this gets through to the portal. Big thumbs up here from me, sevens across the board. It's nice seeming something that can be funny without reverting to something that's lame or played out.

Score: 10

"*A round of applause*"

by: ArgusAlastor

date: September 7, 2006

This was very amusing, very well done, and beats so much of the crap that comes through the portal. I'm voting 5 on this based purely on your excellent effort.

Score: 7

"Decent, but SLOW"

by: RSQViper

date: September 6, 2006

I think it was a funny idea, but it just took forever. The sound effects were odd (mostly the poking of the balloon), the speach was oddly slow and the whole movie was very slow-moving. I think a faster pace would have been much more efficient.

The graphics were pretty good and the intro and exit were good.

3/5

Score: 10

"Like. wow man!"

by: madpol1

date: September 6, 2006

That was cosmic and comic. Really good animation, better drafting than is common here as well.

Cool cautionary tale about greed and Kharma. The universe really does get him. Also nice contrast, with the innocent able to hold the cosmos without danger.

Score: 10

"It's good."

by: WADR

date: September 6, 2006

Take that, cop. For only your second flash, it was good. shows that if one wants too much, he gets crushed by a Hummer. Good moral. Keep it up.