Score: 3
"It was okay..."
date: September 1, 2006
But I think you didn't put too much work into the animation or anything. You just made the sprites walk, and when they were standing still, nothing really happened, it didn't seem very interesting. The English was easy to understand, but I didn't think it was a very good story in the first place. Good luck with future animations, and try not to take little shortcuts or anything, make sure it looks smooth, and make the characters express stuff.