Score: 5
"If I see"
date: September 13, 2006
++++ Voices are all great.
++ Subtitles at start add extra humour.
-- I feel the starting animation could be a little faster. Considering its simplicity, I don't feel you can afford to keep us staring without distractions.
--- The way you mixed up auto-traced bg, fine lines on the fed-ex package and the south-park style. If you'd carried on mixing styles, it might have become a style in itself if done carefully. However, with the way that line weights and styles were mixed, seemingly with little thought, it just looked kinda awkward.
++ I enjoyed the tiny look into the bg with the genuine outtakes and screenies.
- Easter egg. Well drawn but disappointing.
-- I felt a few of the jokes (mainly the whole orc scene) were tired.
-- The end seemed a bit sudden.
--- Terrible buttons. Specially the 'next' buttons in the 'bg' section. Check the 'hit' frame. That's the area over which it can be clicked. Generally, a rectangle slightly larger than the actual picture works well.
+++ It sets the scene fairly well.
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If I see #2, I'll watch it.
