Score: 4
"Hm."
date: August 20, 2006
I've seen this come through the portal exactly like this several times, and each time, it's been blammed. Perhaps it's worth redoing some of this to make it more interesting. Surely you've gotten some constructive criticism from the other reviewers who have left you comments in the past?
I like the play, er, I mean, movie, and I like that you're trying to redo it as a sprite flash. However, the quality of some of your graphics was less than stellar, and the frame rate was low enough that everything looked really choppy. Also, the volume of the songs was pretty low.
This is Newgrounds, so you're going to have a hard time getting people to accept a song scene with no action whatsoever. While they're singing, have them *doing* something; keep your audience entertained while they're listening to the music clips, and you'll have a lot better luck with this.
The first few times, you got my protection vote, but now that you've submitted it unchanged several times, I'm voting to blam it. But I hope you'll improve it and submit a new version, because I really do like this idea.
Author's Response:
You just lost a protection point buddy!
Anyway, thanks for the advice.