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Score: 6

"has me"

by: Bezman

date: December 2, 2006

+++ Great voices.

++ Start (superman) made me chuckle.

++ I like the style of the comic intro.

+++ Amusing bios.

-- Though for static pictures, why no colour? You could have sweet bitmaps...

--- In flashback, baby's body size/shape keeps changing.

--- Loads of misspellings in character bios/subtitles. Worst is 'nefew' (should be 'nephew').

-- If we start the movie with the scene select, the music never ends.

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Seems kinda like UVS with original characters. Much preferring this, with its lighthearted tone. Made me chuckle and has me vaguely interested in the characters.

Score: 6

"Need to tweak a little bit more."

by: sapphyres

date: August 8, 2006

Go back with spellcheck more times, had some typoes.

But I'm not lowering your score for that.

You need to check for small mistakes a lil bit more. Like some stuff in captions weren't spoken and such.

Ok step to some good flash animation. Not awesome but you'll get the skills you need by experience if you keep on trying!

Score: 8

"Good original characters and story line."

by: Valzor

date: August 8, 2006

Clever setup - like getting into scenes. Plumberman lost his face? (explanation unusual). Graphics could use some work on your superheros. Thanks for the original story.

Score: 5

"It Was Alright But Needs A Lot of Work"

by: Darkend

date: August 8, 2006

You've got a lot of things in there that bugged me. Do you go back and read what you type after you type stuff? Because you do realize that your character description section is full of typoes and bad grammar, right? Like instead of saying, "He is" or "He's" you used "His". Very bad. Have someone else look it over for you and check your spelling.

As far as for the movie itself the graphics were pretty okay but I have a question. What is up with that gun the robber was using? It seemed as a bullet shell or what looked like a one slowly came rising out of the barrel....? Dude, whats that? Do you know how guns work? The barrel is not where you load a weapon nor do shells ever come out of there. Go study up on them or something because I don't know what you were trying to pull.

And I'm sorry to say your humor didn't get a single laugh from me. It was kinda old humor. What annoys me is when artists comment on their own flaws in the movie or anything that's strange. "Why don't you have a face?" "Why is my voice gargily?" You know, stuff like that. Artists feel those are questions reviewers will be asking and commenting on so what the artist does is bring up these questions himself in the flash in order to play along with the audience, and it's sort of a disclaimer. But really, you just look like an idiot. Whether or not that is your reason for doing so, it still looks that way and I recommend fixing it. I think those were the only problems I saw. Fix these, find better humor overall, and you'll do way better next time.

-Darkend-

Score: 5

"good"

by: Haplon

date: August 8, 2006

it was kindof like a mix of things from other superhero stories, however the characters are original. it was really good and i will enjoy seeing the sequel

Score: 0

"why did you do this"

by: artemis449

date: August 8, 2006

i don't know what your other reviews were like but that was out there and i mean way out there. just stick to your other work and don't make a sequel.