Score: 9
"Oh, good one!"
date: July 23, 2006
Good thing to see amateur's work pass!
Here, have some tips.
You should increase the framerate to 24, that'd make it look much cooler and smooth. That's it.
Well, the rest was quite good,coming from an unexperienced author, so congratulations!
I loved the secret really much!
Happy Sunshine Day!
Author's Response:
Thankyou.
But I like 10 FPS :(
lol.
<3