Score: 6
"Right, I'm gonna be a bit critical here"
date: July 5, 2006
Now I'm VERY RARELY critical with other people's work, but here goes.
First off, I'm planning to make a turn based RPG in the style of FF1 in Flash, and this is NEARLY right up my alley, I'll give you that.
The thing is I'm used to learning through visual techniques, so SCREENSHOTS of what you're trying to explain would be a MASSIVE help (I have Asperger's by the way so please bear with me).
Also, sorry if I didn't notice (and maybe a bit dumb), but besides the attack and the health you didn't put any formulae of how defense and magic defense can be involved when the character and the enemy is attacking each other, because that would REALLY help.
When you mentioned to put movie clips and frames and so fourth, you really didn't mention VERY CLEARLY where to put them (well, thats what I think anyway, most people probably got what you meant anyway).
Forgive me, but what about explaining a bit of coding on how to trigger a turned based battle on a world map? An explanation on the use of tiles and also the Collision Detection would be nice too.
If you can explain a lot more in possibly another RPG tutorial WITH:
- Screenshots
- Bullet Points
- VERY CLEAR AND SIMPLE Explanations
then I'll DEFINETLY be following your tutorials in the future.
Overall, this was a VERY nice try, in fact I'll try and see if I can make sense from it by doing what you've said in this tutorial.
Rating 6, voting 4.
Author's Response:
Screenshots. Okay, maybe next time.
And about the magic issue. YES! - That's what I forgot to do! It felt empty some how, but I didn't know. Thanks.
I don't really explain stuff that well, sorry. I think I actually did pretty well.
All that collision and other stuff will be in my more advanced tutorial coming up! So watch for it!
Okay, that was a huge review, and the most helpful one I've had so far. Thanks a ton! For the score too, you know.