Score: 7
"good movie with few flaws"
date: July 14, 2006
it was a good plot with more of a twist but some things you left out of the real paper mario and a few of the laws of phisics violated.
if it was really paper mario he would fight some bad guys like in the game.
he only met 2 new people.
when he goes through"the blistering colds..or whatever its called" why didnt the fire on his hat extinguish?
how could mario's hat burst bowser to flame but not mario?
usualy kamek would swoop down and enchant bowser with more power.
he shouldv fought some monsters on his journy to bowser's castle.
he shouldv at least rescued someone.
thats all i can think of and for anyone that might correct me, this is only to help out the creator if he's gona make another mario flash like this so dont be mean if you do, and to the creator im not offending you im only saying what you missed.
overall good movie!
Author's Response:
1. I did include a couple like the huge pirhana plant. The bandit and the wallet. The bomb-ombs in the battle field. The frozen goombas. but there could have been more I agree.
2. Becuase of the adventure sequeces I had to do that. But I will do it next time.
3. I had to ignore phisics for a bit for the sake of the joke.
4.Also for the sake of he joke.
5. That I actually forgot and would have been better if I added.
6. (read #1) Also i tried to make him look like a wimp.
7. sake of my closing joke.
This did help alot and thank you. Next time I make a mario fflash I know who I'll go to before I submit it.