Score: 10
"Awesome Job..."
date: February 15, 2007
Hey, awesome Job on this one...I never tried flash, artwork and drawing aren't my specialty, but I can tell when something's done well.
Having read the story in Visionaries, I liked it and I think a small part of me wanted to see it "brought to life" if you would. Thank you for submitting this, it was awesome.
Now having never done flash, I can only recommend or critique things based on a strictly lay viewpoint. The one thing that I would recommend is that you find a way to make this less choppy seeming, there were a few points where it seemed like the scene was disconnected. Perhaps it is fine the way it is, just my preference, but you still did a wonderful Job.