Score: 5
"you tried too hard"
date: June 26, 2006
im all for random, but this was jus idiotic.
sheer randomness is moronic and repetitive.
there was no surprise, as soon as i relized it was all jus whatever the hell happens, it became stupid.
i understand you weren't going for a plot, jus made it too be...creative(?) but regardless, yer idea of humor is kinda retard'd.
i did like, however, the use of many various styles incorporated into this, though that was jus about it.
Author's Response:
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