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Score: 6

"Decent Work"

by: johntheactor

date: June 23, 2006

Great premise and promising story. Pauses were too long and the main character's reactions were a little phony. The whole flash moved a little too slow for my taste but a great start on what will surely be a great series.

Score: 10

"hell yea boi"

by: six-pac

date: June 23, 2006

dat shit was hot as hell, i cant wait to see the next one

Score: 7

"Pretty good short"

by: Heinrich

date: June 22, 2006

I liked the graphic style and animation. The sound was also pretty good quality. This has great potential.

Score: 10

"Nice work."

by: uNiVeRsALViTaLiTY

date: June 22, 2006

Good job with the animation. The story seems like its going to be unpredictable... good.

Score: 9

"i liked it it had humor and violance."

by: alucard-hellsing1

date: June 22, 2006

it was good kinnda funny to.

Score: 9

"Very intriuging indeed!"

by: abe420

date: June 22, 2006

This was a great flash! It was movie material it really was. It was really fluent with the animation. I believe you have a really good future ahead of you. Keep up the good work!

Score: 10

"Want more!"

by: spaz777

date: June 22, 2006

That was excellent man. Your animation is amazing, but the only thing was that it was way too short. I can't wait to see the next episode.

Score: 9

"Need more!"

by: The-Angus

date: June 22, 2006

That was too short dude, what is he meant to do?! Oh well, your graphics are awesome and the sound is incredible as well. And I wouldn't eat a 4000 year old cookie no matter how many times a chinese man slapped me.

5/5

Score: 9

"Funny!"

by: sysmatix

date: June 22, 2006

I thought that was very funny,and can't wait too see the next one that you make, keep making the series theres so much that you could build up on.

Score: 7

"not too bad"

by: thecanadiangod

date: June 22, 2006

I like it but you sould get some poeple with more emtion in there voice. They all ways sounded the same not supire or anything