Score: 6
"'mistake' made"
date: July 3, 2006
+++ Sharp vectors
+++Really expressive voices
+++ The ninja's 'mistake' made me chuckle.
-- Maybe you could've had Bunnycat be a tad more expressive? His actual eyelids/shape-of-whites-shown never change, for example...
-- I felt the end could've been directed better. I think we needed a slightly longer build between showing the rancid flies, glass etc. and him licking it. Maybe he could've shrugged, maybe pausing a second longer... just my kick-ass opinion.
Author's Response:
Well expressions I'm a bit weary of since everything is tweened in this instead of the keyframing I use in the usual animations. I'll experiment with stuff in the future.