Score: 9
"great work"
date: June 22, 2006
give yourself a pat on the back for this one, it was great. some minor problemas son the voice of Palpatine sucked, el tempo de reaction for the one with the tiny horns should have been much faster, so that when palpatine says amidala he looks palpatine should have immediately fired his sith lightning, and the question marks above the Jedi's head should have appeared while the lightning was racing towards him, good creative placement of the second password (i wont say where), but you should have made Windu bet 127.29 credits (or some weird number like that) and made that the password, also the guard holding his poker hand in the deleted scene should have been holding it backwards so you could see his hand, great spaceship, great frog drawing, when they "went commando" you should have had one of them yell "commando mode" then they could scurry around crouched over, while one of them sort of hummed/beatboxed a little suspense/action thing, also in the second deleted scene you should have had them have a lightsaber battle using the subtitles as lightsabers and at one point have one of them with their "lightsaber" pointed at the other but it doesnt quite reach, then have him say in a dramatic voice "blah...blah...blah" thus lengthening the "lightsaber" enough for it to reach the other guy.
and thats all i can think of right now...
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. I really appreciate this kind of reviews, rather than those who critise without any suggestions for improvements.Yeah, shall consider what you suggest, but i guess im not goin to make another remake of this remake... :P
