Score: 4
"Slow pacing hurts both tension and comic payoff"
date: July 23, 2009
The pace of the film was more than a little too slow. The bit where the one Jedi bets his life, for instance, could have been funny if the dialogue had been more snappy.
Also, it seemed like you weren't quite sure what you wanted it to be. It started out as a parody, but it seemed to turn into an excuse to show off your knowledge of the Expanded Universe. Bringing up Ataro and Shii-Cho is cool if you can tie it into something relevant, but it just seemed like you were throwing nerdy words around.
That said, I really liked that you took creative liberty with the storyline, and I loved the bobblehead look of the characters.
