Score: 4
"Poor"
date: January 21, 2009
This turned out to be a music video more than anything. There wasn't too much story at all, and you even changed the way your character looks, which dosn't make any sense to me at all. Also you went from your first in this series, which was supposed to be background for the shadow in Lilium, to this which dosn't mention the shadow at all. You also went from what seemed like an action piece to this music video like one, just seems off to me.
On the plus side nice song.