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I have never seen anything like this ever before! I mean, you actually mixed Incredible drawing skills with exemplary animation. You keep up the good work!
Stay funky!

January 22, 2008

Author's Response:

Such flattery!

Thanks. You stay funky too. :-)

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Score: 10

"When"

by: PiePie

date: April 11, 2007

did you submit this to the portal? Hmm I never knew you made an animation. Anyways I have to say what a wonderful animation you made the style was really something to watch.

It amazes me how you did that in 12 hours. I spend 12 hours trying to import things into flash and trying to find buttons and stuff.

You should really put all your effort into a project and make a really good flash movie and put Adam Phillips to shame...

Anyways great stuff.

November 28, 2007

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Aww shucks. I guess I need to stop being a lazy arse and make more stuff quickly. ;-)

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Score: 8

"Great art :)"

by: edit-undo

date: March 12, 2007

That was a nice little biscuit of artistic coolness. You must have put quite a bit of time into each drawing. How many drawings did you do? I've always wanted to try and make something like this, but I dont have the patience... or the colours :(
The music seemed fitting, and I like the way the haiku was introduced word by word. The art was perfectly imperfect, it had that slightly flawed and scribbly look which I love :)
One thing I would say is that it could be a bit longer, but thats it really. Good work.

Author's Response:

Thanks, dude!

I watched it just now, and the sun has 5 drawings, the 2nd 'scene' 2, the 3rd has maybe 4. As I said in the comments, "12 hours. 7-ish hour drawing, 5-ish putting it together in Flash."

Fading from one picture to the next meant I could use fewer pics, but obviously wouldn't work for proper, normal-speed action.

It couldn't really be any longer, considering it's a haiku. Also, this way, I could basically finish it in a couple of days and not get bored. ;-)

All hail LJCoffee!

Glad you liked.

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Score: 9

"That was great!"

by: BenwaHakubi

date: December 8, 2006

I really loved the art, I can tell you put alot of work into it. The funky chinese music was the best! Nice poetry too!

Author's Response:

Thanks! The sun was shining and laying out in the grass, drawing on a pad of paper really didn't feel like work.

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Score: 7

"different"

by: GayForGirls

date: May 16, 2006

i like it, it's not long, but it's nice music, and a nice haiku, the drawings are also faboulus, but i wouldn't spend money in a light box, i think they are way too expensive,AND it's fine like this, this is how walt disney works(with some off the movies nowadays) this is original, the outcom that u get with a lightbox, is simulair, but this is better, in this way you can see it's hand drawn on paper and it may be blocky but it's more original, okay, i think i repaeted myself too much, i hope this was a usefull revieuw!

/cheers