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Score: 10

"Very nice man!"

by: LeetWeed

date: May 9, 2006

Dude it's very cool! I tought u would never finish it, but u did! Great work! Nice graphics, the only disadvantage is your mic... =)

Score: 10

"grerat dlash...bad sound"

by: Dizzix

date: May 9, 2006

Great work on the graphics...But very bad voice acting...You should have maybe:
1) Bought a new microphone
2) Got some people to help you with them
3) Make subtitles...
But still, great work!

Score: 7

"Intersting"

by: SerraStryke

date: May 9, 2006

i thought the plot was pretty well thought out and executed but the voice was difficult to understand as well as ....well, unsuitable. be good if you did a remake of this.

btw, when the bald guy comes across "Flaminco," the narrator's voice cracked. lol

Score: 8

"Good"

by: Stone-Killa

date: May 8, 2006

great graphics and storyline but u coulda worked work on voices lil bit mo

Score: 8

"That's one solid fricking movie"

by: SNS

date: May 8, 2006

Awesome job dude, that was really great but i must agree with retro-nerd, the voice acting was average, you needed a really deep voice to fit with the Noir film genre.

Good job, a solid 10 with better voices

Score: 8

"Quality Submission."

by: Retro-Nerd

date: May 8, 2006

Great submission, with only a few flaws. Firstly as many have said, the voice acting is a little below par, I know you did it yourself, and it was good for that, but perhaps you should look at getting some volunteers to do the voice overs for credit, and practise. Secondly, Noir is generally not mixed with colours besides black and white, I know that it is becoming popular to do this, and your colour work was important enough for the story, but it's more comic book Noir when you add colours. Just me being picky, the story was great, I had a feeling all along, and you gave just enough hints so that was all good. I only ask that you include a replay button at the end of the credits, because I wanted to watch it again. Congratulations on a quality first submisson.

Score: 9

"Hmmm.."

by: GirlFromZeeNorth

date: May 8, 2006

Very good. I loved the graphics. The dialogue, though, was a little forced and hard to understand at times. Very, very good! Maybe if you have someone help you a little more with some of the dialogue, then it will be better.

But the graphics, my friend, were astounding. Very classic, moody, perfectly done, and dramatic.! :)

Score: 7

"awesome =D"

by: Jakznake

date: May 8, 2006

Only thing rong with tha was the quiality of the voice, but everything else was great :D