Score: 4
"it needs work"
date: June 18, 2006
i like your attempt but you need to improve on your style, a flying pico thats supposed to look like he is jumping doesnt really cut it sorry, and usually people on motorbikes dont have their hair back while goin in reverse, which im not really sure what it is supposed to look like, the storyline is partially original but reminds me of other flash artists, more time is needed on this work sorry.
Fliggy