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Score: 10

"HOLY crap"

by: RENNAT56

date: March 6, 2009

so all of the girls died how i am crying ok make a nother one from the past.

Score: 10

"waaaait"

by: Teriyakiboy45

date: July 23, 2008

so all the girls died???? Whaa??? Can u make a flash about the past? u know b4 trust bcame the destined and b4 all the girls died?

Score: 7

"Looks Really Good"

by: JunioruShidobu-Chan

date: May 25, 2008

It's Awesome :3 I Liek All Characters :D I Might do Fan Art.. If Ya don't mind :3 I like to do that :3

Score: 9

"i like the music"

by: BlackWinds

date: March 24, 2007

all of your backround music is good specialy the final fantasy 7 music at the end make more

Score: 7

"*Inserts a block with speed up engraved on it*"

by: RoyofGradiusSTF

date: April 24, 2006

Alright, Lukas you need some improvement.

Sound: Most of the sound heard in this episode comes from a game called Gradius. I don't mind, rather, I like that. The quality of sound wasn't my problem, but the some sounds don't fit for what they were used. Biggest example would be the Teleport using the Option Hunter alarm sound.

Graphics: My only complaint would be to set the anchor points closer together with the animation.

The Story is fine, nothing to worry about.

Overall, you need to speed up the movie more.

My suggested addtions? Voice Actors if possible, and , if you feel you're up to it, hand drawn animation. You can take baby steps with hand drawn stuff, starting with the key scene being hand drawn, and then moving slowly one episode after another.

Score: 3

"Needs Work"

by: DocMonster

date: April 24, 2006

The Good: The sprites and sound! The sprite customizing was done pretty well and the backgrounds looked great. When there was sound and sound effects, they worked well.

The Bad: Animation! In the opening scene, there are two moving sprites, but they float a bit too much. Find a solid anchor point for them so when they're supposed to be moving in place, they stay in the same spot. There is also hardly any real animation to be found in this piece; there are too many static figures which makes it boring to look at.

The Ugly: Pacing! This piece would also benefit a great deal from voice acting. The story drags too much and becomes very boring. Having to space bar between all the dialogue only makes it worse. Even if you don't have a mic, check the Voice Acting Club in the Clubs and Crews forum. They'll be able to send you sound files you can simply add to your cartoon once you send them the script with some direction on how to read the lines. A good voice actor could help make your cartoon more interesting.

I can appreciate the effort and the story you're trying to tell, but this piece falls short. I wish you the best of luck on your next project.

Score: 4

"boring..."

by: PaperBagMask

date: April 24, 2006

dragged out for too long...and got boring after a while

Score: 7

"ok..."

by: Crunchy-Toons

date: April 24, 2006

u should put more humor in it, but it's ok

Score: 6

"Nice job"

by: Roundhousekick

date: April 24, 2006

Pretty good but can be improved

Score: 0

"Why do I have to right-click and play every time?"

by: UKBBfan

date: April 24, 2006

You'll have to sort that out quick if this is to stick about.