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Score: 7

"Constructive Criticism"

by: CraigSchriver

date: April 15, 2006

Hey, that was a pretty good movie. You could improve it by adding a few more gags in the whole factory process. The timing was nice. There's lot's of opportunity to add more gags though.

Score: 7

"Nice job"

by: TheRedSpartan

date: August 6, 2007

Your work is nice, this isnt your best but its nice quelity makes up for it. It isnt humorous, but not everything has to be, Good job

Score: 5

"It true."

by: Tturbo

date: April 15, 2006

This is a good thinking about the use of bunny for Easter. A little harch but cool.

Score: 5

"good"

by: pirateninjas1

date: April 15, 2006

That was a pretty good movie, the graphics and everything was up to par. It was even funny at some parts, but it was way to short, that really hurt it. You should really make it longer then it would be perfect. Everything was great, just make it longer.

Score: 5

"A bit unbalanced"

by: BetterthanPANTS

date: April 16, 2006

I agree with the gags, however this was unfairly judged, 3?!! Its no bitey of brachenwood but it showed effort and style and seeing how that god awfull collab i last rated got higher, i have to say keep it up.

Score: 4

"Too short"

by: Ekima

date: April 15, 2006

I actually liked it from the start, was happy to finally see a nice made flash... and then it's over? It's bad when you leave people with a feeling of it not being long enough...

It seemed so nice and sweet...

Damn, I almost feel like cursing because I wanted to see more.

Score: 4

"=[ not exactly sure what that was about..."

by: Sk8erGirl14

date: April 15, 2006

...obviously a Easter short...but really short...oh well...

things looked good, but it was just too short to enjoy...

END.

Score: 4

"Too short"

by: ArgentAngel

date: April 15, 2006

You did a good job animating, but it was just faaarrr too short. Try extending some stuff. I can tell by this animation that you have a sense of humor, so try to use it some more. Good Luck.

--ArAn

Score: 3

"Terrible"

by: chaosinc80

date: April 20, 2006

- Too short.
- Put some effort into the gfx.
- Don't switch scenes so quickly, hardly have time to make out what's going on in each one.