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Score: 10

"Sad"

by: Lelouchzero101

date: June 28, 2008

this video is so sad i cried when i watched it nice make more

Score: 7

"Cool."

by: Dew

date: January 5, 2008

Now this is defintley a different style that I have never seen before. Although it kinda looks like a slide show, to me, the story line is really quite deep and is cool to see. The graphics were good, but not great and they didin't really add to the entertainment, although you didin't really have to. All in all, good job.

Score: 7

"Good"

by: Cyberdevil

date: January 5, 2008

A nice, wellanimated and seriously plotted submission. Good graphics, smooth movement and a good storyline as well. Can't find any flaws in it, keep up the good work!

-cd-

Score: 6

"((( NOTBAD )))"

by: XwaynecoltX

date: December 23, 2006

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad it could be slightly better though, what i liked about this was the story, and the animation was ok but could be abit smoother, you may want to think about some more compression aswell, anyways nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some smoother animating, and some more compression...

~~OVERALL~~
Great movie great story style, some compression is needed...

~X~

Score: 6

"Interesting"

by: milinko959

date: April 13, 2006

^^Good Points^^
I thought the storyline was pretty good. It's original, easy to get in to, and fun to watch. The drawings were also pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, this movie wasn't executed too well. It has very little animation, which is usually something included in a movie. The voice overs were also very low and hard to hear and weren't synced at all with the subtitles.

Score: 7

"i liked it"

by: zachiah-420

date: April 13, 2006

i thought that it was really good and i really enjoyed and i felt sorry for the mother and the boy but 0verall it was really good

Score: 5

"Good for a first try"

by: Maria-Wolfwings

date: April 13, 2006

I think it is good for a first try. I like your style of characters.
Ok, are you ready for some critique and some constructive critisim? :)
The voice and the subtitles don't match all the time and the lines are rough, with little white dots that are distracting. For your next animation, i suggest cleaning up the lines and making sure to get rid of those white dots.

Score: 1

"good try."

by: joezombie2

date: April 13, 2006

The subtitles dont keep up with the voice, the voice is annoying as hell, the animation/drawings are sub-par, and the story is random. Good try for a 1st try, but BLAM.

Score: 5

"Has promise.."

by: Hayai

date: April 13, 2006

Looks like it could be good, but the audio needs to be tweaked (had trouble hearing it) and the subtitles need to actually sync-up with the dialogue. Just keep trying...

Score: 1

"..."

by: Effects-Team

date: April 13, 2006

...what?!