Score: 7
"Droogte."
date: April 6, 2006
I like your style and the story was actually getting interesting, and than it just stopped.
Try making something a little longer next time, this looked like a trailer.
BTW, not much emotion either. That's why I gave points for humour, it was kinda.. Dry. Lol.
Overall: nice style, I hope you'll make another one soon. :)