Score: 7
"Wow that was fast."
date: January 16, 2007
Ok here are three reasons why I didn't give you a ten.
1) too short. you didnt show their situation in battle or their fiery death
2) no battle
3) not as much humor as I thought
Good job all you have to improve on is length, humor, and stronger scenes. I hope I'll see these improvements. I loved the moral however sexist it was it was funny.