Score: 7
"Cute"
date: March 26, 2008
I loved the story of this flash. It was very sweet.
My biggest disappointment was in the cartoony look. I think if the colors has been more muted and shadows had been used to increase the dramatic effect it would have been more impactful.
However, you seem to have really great handle on movement. The second I saw the toy care knock into her bed post, I though, "Wow, that bounced but like a really toy car would have". After that, I kept a close eye on the movement and I noticed that all the way through the story the car specifically moved just as a real one would. Another example was how is slowly coasted to a stop when it was rolled t the ghost girl.
I also wanted to mention that the music fit the flow very well, especially the last song when they are playing. It contrasted the rest of it so much that it really got the warm and fuzzies going.