Score: 6
"Umm geez.."
date: May 6, 2007
My my you've actually made a cartoon that got me to write a review for once.
I like the idea i guess. I mean.. A ninja penguin! Lol, where do you come up with these kind of things?
Ofcourse i got a few points of improvement:
1. Too slow.. I think it's been pointed out in previous reviews, the action is too slow paced, and the entire "oh no it's comming right at me" cutscenes that last for like 10 seconds reminded me of pokemon. And NO that is NOT a good thing!
2. Add more twists. It was a very predictable storyline, very cliche no offense.
3. Yeah ummm i really do wonder.. How the hell is it the guy/penguin/ninja owns (what seems to be) a red lamborgini and an airplane, both probably valuing hundreds of thousands, if not millions, just to blow them up while landing on Antartica?
I mean COME ON!
Fix that.. Please.. It hurt my soul in a deep touchy place.
Other than that i must say, with some practice, new storyline ideas and another fresh submission (mixed with coffee ofcourse!) i'd say you'll turn out to be a fine flash-artist.
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Can't say i'm a fan of coffee but thanks for you're review. I know what you mean about the action scenes, i'd pretty much given up on the flash by the time I got to that section, so saying they were rushed would be a bit of an understatment.
I like the penguin having all that stuff, thought it gave him a bigger back story perhaps, but oh well, can't be to everyones taste.
Anyway, good and thought provoking review, nice one.