Score: 2
"Hmmm...."
date: February 18, 2009
Maybe add a little bit better sounds, to give it more life. When the guy got hit with the pipe, no noise indicating he got hit, and things like that help. Also, the story and dialogue is a bit terrible. Seems like everyone was a bit on the same page and not really individuals. That's just me, but then again I haven't put up a video yet, so take my critique as you would like to. I couldn't bare to watch it all, not because it was terrible, but just because I wanted to point those things out really fast and go to bed.