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Score: 7

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by: killer-juggalo

date: February 21, 2006

that was...gross...but hillarious none the less.

Score: 7

"Funny ne pas"

by: Jamith

date: February 21, 2006

Yeah.

Well for starters, poop jokes are no longer funny. Like, maybe 10 years ago it was funny to 6 year olds, but no longer is it funny.

Also, this humor is completely stolen from Ren & Stimpy. And I don't mean that you were inspired by that humor and added your own creative spin to it, that was EXACTLY the same humor. I'm guessing defence to that would be that you won't see that in a Ren & Stimpy episode. Well do you know how easy it is to write something were all the humour comes from poop? Easy peasy.

So, like the one aspect of this that put a grin on my face was the funny facial expressions and body movements. Especially when the guy was at the door giving the candy to the kid, but even that was bomb diggity stole from Ren & Stimpy. Like, I'm telling anyone here who things that was origonal to go watch ONE episode, I can guarantee you will clearly be able to see that every single aspect of humor from this was cleanly punked right off it.

Dude, your a good animator, like really good, so make something worthwhile and origonal. You've got past the hardest part of being able to make a quality flash, which is getting good at flash itself, now just let your creative juices flow and create something beutifully origonal.

By the way, this might have been a bit better at haloween, whats with all these haloween themed tunes going around lately? Either way, godspeed, good luck with your next work.

Score: 8

"Good work."

by: Overbite6014

date: February 21, 2006

It reminded me of a John K. cartoon. Nice job.

Score: 2

"Wow. poop."

by: talat113

date: February 21, 2006

The only good thing about this was the animation. However, nice animation doesn't make up for overused jokes and the lack of a plot.
Do something funny, next time...eating shit got old a long time ago.

Score: 8

"VERY DISGUISTING!!!!!"

by: nikorasu1

date: February 21, 2006

Funny but you went over the top with the kid eating the crap. But better than anything I can do. Just watch "The hurdler" and you'll see what I mean!

Score: 5

"Dragged a bit, didn't it?"

by: JoeEngland

date: February 21, 2006

I won't really comment on how very disgusting this was, since I think you knew what you were going for. But I will criticize the pacing. It was very slow, man. Very. I mean, each turn of the story just seemed to take too long to get past. It's like we've got a minute or two of watching him make the "candy," then of watching the kid come up to the door and expressing desire for candy, and of the guy preparing to give it to him, another couple of minutes watching the kid take the candy and... run... off... and open his bag... and look for the stuff... and find it... and look at it... and prepare to eat it... and then slooowwwlly chew it... and one more minute or so of the kid deciding what he thought of it... and then the naked guy wrapping up, and thinking about trying it himself... you see what I mean? It's a pretty simple plot which I think could've been done in at least half the time.

Score: 9

"Lol love the Ren & Stimpy style graphics"

by: MooglesRuleAll

date: February 21, 2006

Forget what that homo soulkys says, the cartoon got an adult rating, so that means kids shouldnt watch it, unless they're retarded, then its OK. Its gross Ill admit, but its "funny gross" not "eww thats fucking disgusting" gross. Good work, I wont say I loved it because that means I like eating poo, but good work!
P.S. Weird ass mini game dude, but strangely amusing...

Score: 8

"DECENT"

by: bassplayer07

date: February 21, 2006

you have great animating skills and the graphics were supurb. You should try to make a better cartoon with an actual story line and less perverted thoughts. More talking would also help. Movie 2/10 Graphics and your talent 9/10

Score: 7

"Nice, what can I say?"

by: foxyb

date: February 21, 2006

The humour in it was heavily toilet orientated; I don’t think its really American humour, hence some bad reviews. It was basically Ren and Stimpy lets face it. But the animation was very good and the music with a little tweaking could have accompanied it so well. I rate this a 7 because it has potential and so do you as an artist, animator and maker of music.

Score: 7

"Not bad"

by: xrandox1000

date: February 21, 2006

its ok funny but no one talks in the whole thing.But I liked it anyways