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Score: 6

"Nice first try"

by: PoisonPhantom

date: July 14, 2008

This is pretty good for a first flash. Though you might want to speak louder for Jazzes voice next time.

Score: 4

"Good, but not great."

by: acolecobob

date: September 8, 2007

The graphics in this leave much to be desired. I would suggest using shapes instead of doing it freehand. I would also suggest having a picture of the transformers in front of you when you draw. But They were barely recognizable. Also, you need to practice the voice acting for this. It was far off par. Try getting a real microphone and doing it 2 or 3 feet away so you can do Starscream's voice without making it too loud. He tends to yell. lol But you can tell you were using a headset or a computer mic and you were right up to the mic. On the good side, the storyline was a strong one. If you wrote that yourself, it was very well done.

Score: 7

"I like it!"

by: Son-Finale

date: August 18, 2007

While not the most perfectly drawn flash on here. I can see you worked really hard on this. Keeep praticing and I'd like to see this remade one day. Its got potencial. Good work! 5/5 for effort.

Score: 1

"YOU SHIT"

by: Alex-fu

date: July 28, 2007

YOU MAKE TRANSFORMERS LOOK LIKE SHIT

Score: 6

"Could've been a lot better"

by: Brago

date: July 3, 2007

GRAPHICS: 4/10 (That's just sad)
STYLE: 6/10 (Moderate)
SOUND: 1/10 (awful)
VIOLENCE: 10/10 (this submission's best score, it had violence aplenty)
INTERACTIVITY: 6/10 (Could be better)
HUMER: 3/10 (didn't make me laugh)
OVERALL: 6/10
TOTAL: 36/70

This video was okay. Keep working and you'll make some really awesome videos

Nikko

Score: 5

"Hmmm..."

by: Albionensis

date: August 7, 2006

The graphics are not good at all, but it's still good t see someone who draws by hand.
the sound is not very good either as there's no volume leveling.

Stll, I'll give you an overall score of 5 as it's a good idea and because you've got the background just right=)

3/5 and keep up the good work mate =)

Score: 5

"Good"

by: Silver-Iris

date: March 4, 2006

I'm a big fan of the origenal Transformers tv show.
The good parts to this are that the lazers sownd just right. Because they're the real ones from the show, right?
The story line is corect to, all the things that happened in this movie are what is discribed on the fan web-site.

The parts to improve on are that the voices should sownd more like the real voices, and try to draw better.
Otherwise it looks like crap.
But you did good on this one.

Score: 8

"Very nice......"

by: Dogbertious

date: January 30, 2006

Great! About time there was more Transformer flashes.

Next time, try to improve on the graphics, and the voice acting. Otherwise, brilliant.

Score: 3

"not bad, but you need more voices"

by: Jeffshaw

date: January 30, 2006

alpha trion rebuilt as prime? that's the only problem i had with this storyline, other wise, not bad try to improve your animation a little
before the next episode, but i'll still be looking for it, either way

Score: 8

"this is a good start."

by: SirSeraphdeFallen

date: January 30, 2006

i liked this.

at first i thought the artwork was going to drag this down but i was suprised as i watched on. you did a great job.

work on graphics, smoothing out characters and cleaning things up a bit.

work on making sound a little better quality. you did all the voices right? (not sure) if so try and get some friends to voice some of the characters.

music and scene transitions were excellent, as were the transformations it looked good.

storyline is stronge.. had a good length.. over all pretty nice.

i gave you a 4 because you can improve on some of these things.

happy flashing!@!@!@!