Score: 10
"Well I'm not sure if this is newer than Serenity.."
date: March 10, 2006
I thought that this was pretty friggen awesome, but.... If this is newer than Serenity, than I think I might be a smidge disappointed... I don't want to sound like I'm shitting on you cuz I could never put together a peice of work like this but, I don't think you established as much intensity in this as you did in Serenity. For example, in this I think ure guy may have been a little too invinsible? It's more xtreme when you have a line of punches all on one guy instead of punch, dead, punch, dead if you know what I mean. Howevr, I did see improvments in this so I still rated overall; 10 (an honest 10) because your camera movements seemed to improve in this... as well as the length of the flick. I just thought that maybe you would like a little minor critsism because I know it helps me. (my biggest pet peeve is that your character had hair, which kinda killed it, I know it would take that much more effort to put it in but... a simple stickman is satisfying enough). All I'm saying is; try to lean it a little more towards your style with Serenity okay?
Ps. I like how the text @ the begining sort of charged up and then blasted away, that was really cool
~Inquiry