Score: 7
"Hey, not bad."
date: March 4, 2008
The positives: you can certainly draw. You took time on it, and I respect that.
The negatives: The story seemed like a recap put in the beginning of a book's sequel, and the subtitles were not exactly what you said. Plus, it's short.
In general, I think you've got budding talent, so fill up that room you have for improvement! I think you could've become an animator and enjoyed twice the success you have now as an artist.