Score: 10
"Lmao that was a nice teaser."
date: December 31, 2005
Truthfully, I liked the teaser, but you shouldn't put something as controversal like Black Jesus in it. lol, I think you just offended a huge majority... Also I am slightly confused as to why the Buddha is in there? If you explain your beliefs with a seperate section in the flash it would make more sense.. At this point I can only assume that you intend to diversify the religious experience by including three racially different religious individuals to suggest a sort of religious unity between religions? But I can't say for sure.. It is very implicit and you would miss it otherwise.. unless you guess.
My constructive criticism is to find something less controversal with the Black Jesus.. if possible unless it alters the intended plot and meaning behind your story and also to explain in a foreword of sorts about what it is exactly your religious perspective in this flash.
You get a 10 from me due to the bigotry of others :P