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Score: 7

"Nice first attempt"

by: Supergecko

date: January 6, 2006

Off to a good start especially as this is your first submission. Keep doing what your doing but make it a a bit better a.k.a graphics and story

Score: 6

"good job"

by: Unspoiled

date: December 28, 2005

hey thats was cool but try to stay true to the title

Score: 5

"erm..."

by: drDAK

date: December 28, 2005

good enough to save. =)
I see alot of where I started with flash in your movie.

Score: 7

"Decent"

by: TribesofHalo

date: December 28, 2005

The graphics need a just a little more fine tuning and maybe shorten a few movements and you got a nice flash style and animation

Score: 7

"Not bad, Not bad at all!"

by: Jonocheese

date: December 28, 2005

Some realy good graphics (skechy)

And everything else was alright

I say that was a good flash for your first submission to newgrounds.
:-)

Score: 4

"Nice Try"

by: patrick-quinn

date: December 28, 2005

I'm giving you a 1/5 purely because I want to see this done again, but with more animation on the body and head.

All good otherwise, music ruled, what was it?

Score: 5

"Not bad"

by: tube-screamer

date: December 28, 2005

it was good and i would like to see more from you

Score: 6

"hmmm"

by: OmikronWeapon

date: December 28, 2005

I kinda like the sketchy feel of the close up drawings.
dont scribble though, the blue attack thing? sorry, no.
the backflipping stick guy? make it close up and it'll look much better.
the story was... well.. absent.
I can see a pretty good flash somewhere in this, honestly.
just use the same style all the time, lose the 'stick' feel and go with the filled-in style.

Score: 0

"sticks..."

by: Pegasusrune

date: December 28, 2005

stick figures always get blammed unless its done as humor and really really good.

sorry but i have to say blam
i liked the sounds and the humor of it though

Score: 4

"Good for first try"

by: CobraBanshee

date: December 28, 2005

It was good for a first try anyway, but it will be blammed im afraid.