Score: 8
"Interesting, Really!"
date: March 7, 2009
Although there were a few ridiculously corny lines, I think that this was a great work. It engaged me into the story, and gave pretty good description of each character. I would, however recommend using a thesaurus or dictionary to improve the speech of your characters. I loved the ending too (especially the music from FF7)! It's the kind of thing that will keep your viewers coming back.
Great stuff, you nailed it it the sprites arena! Despite the excessively cheesy/corny lines that actually added humour to the flash. Keep this going!
~XS°~
