Score: 0
"No effort,..."
date: December 13, 2009
...no animation, no music, no artistic input: No stars.
Just a plain white background and a red "B" in the middle.
Things you could and should improve:
- Animation or interactivity, it looks like it's not animated at all right now, and i believe a decent flash should have at least some proper animation. Another option would be some click-through options, to make it more interactive.
- Music or sounds, because most people, including me, don't like to watch something covered in complete silence. Maybe some splendid animations could compensate the lack of sound, but unfortunately, as stated before, you didn't at all.
- More art, because you just used one letter of the alphabet here. There are many more letters you could use or other characters and objects you could draw. Also there is a tremendous amount of colors, and apparently you decided to use just two.
Your background isn't too inspired or inspiring either; a plain white plane. you could have made a nice setting for your letter to be displayed, but you didn't and I don't like it.
To earn stars from me you should at least have put some effort in it, and to me it doesn't show like you did at all.
So 0/10 and 0/5
