Score: 2
"Hm"
date: November 29, 2005
This was a new animation, but I don't think it will pass judgement.
I will refer to the rpg movie as 1, the smiley movie as 2, and the emotion movie as 3, to make it easier for me to type on this stupid laptop keyboard.
1 2 and 3 all had annoying grammatical errors. 1 mispelled inside and had punctuation issues, most of which I'll excuse due to the concept. 2 had trampoli then ne on the next line, and the bottom word didn't fit on ths sign. 3 had Why? am I alone, a lapse that makes the sentence difficult to understand. The jokes in 1 and 2 were not very funny, and 3 was too short. Animation for all three was very sub-par.
Note that I watched these once each, and they were so short I could nit pick each error and remember them all.
1 and 3 didn't have options to go back to the original screen, only replay buttons. Terribly inconvenient.
I can't say that you guys are good enough for newgrounds just yet... 2 outta 10.
Author's Response:
to bad you didnt like it.
but il have to admit, there were quite abit of gramatical errors.
like the fact that the re-play buttons led back to the menu :p
also it passed judgement with ease so the long nose is on you :p