Score: 4
"needs a plot"
date: November 27, 2005
Okay, it looks like you know what you're doing in the way of quality, and that's good, but it's not enough. The flash itself was rather dumb for the most part, but if you were to get a plot and follow through with an actual story, you might have it made. You have it in you, but you need the animation to have a plot.
Author's Response:
but first let's differentiate between need and want. the flash itself doesn't need a plot. if it's the artist's intention to forego some sort of strict narrative structure, then so it shall be. You didn't like the animation because the traditional narrative structure was absent. so you're the one who's left needing the plot, because it's what you want out of animation. and that's perfectly fine, I don't blame you.
just thought I'd make things clear.