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Score: 7

"loved the intro"

by: vgm2597

date: August 11, 2008

hahaha!!! XD iloved this make more!!!!!!

Score: 7

"((( NOTBAD )))"

by: XwaynecoltX

date: September 5, 2006

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbadm i really liked it, especialy the "ART" and more so with the characters, great backrounds and neat characters made this cool aswell as the funny humor, you may want to add some subtitles though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles just for the overall effect of it all...

~~OVERALL~~
Great artwork neat characters, could use some subtitles though...

~X~

Score: 7

"I get a free dog!?"

by: The-Angus

date: November 21, 2005

It says i get a free dog so i will vote 5. Anywho your whole thing was meh, and the idea was just silly. But the part where he goes through the dog choices was best.

5/5

Score: 7

"Tips!"

by: spectre757

date: November 21, 2005

1. work on transitions! simply fading out with no sound whatsoever is bland and uninteresting. There's nothing wrong with fast cuts.

2. sound quality. That girl's voice was all crackily. What happened to the mic you used for the rest of the voices? If it was the same one, what happened?

3. pacing! That tv commercial was mercilessly long. Based on experience, things are usually funnier when they happen fast and unexpectedly. Don't dwell on the same jokes!

Now in the vain hope that somebody reads this, if not the author himself, i leave you to work on a cartoon of my own.

ciao

Score: 7

"I <3 Ninjas"

by: Meikae

date: November 22, 2005

It has some potential. Yes, you need a better microphone, but I can look past that. The idea is fairly interesting, but that may only be because I LOVE ninjas. Overall tho, nothing fantastic, 3/5.

Score: 7

"Not my thing"

by: Areth

date: November 21, 2005

errr not my thing really. I mean, great graphics and all but...I like more fast paced movies. Maybe the second part will have more humor to.

Score: 7

"It was nice..."

by: JustinMylesStarwind

date: November 20, 2005

...But it was too short you know...
And there wasn't that many funny parts there...
but good job...

Score: 7

"ok that was freaky"

by: superafrogirl

date: November 24, 2005

it was strange yet entertaining in a way

Score: 7

"Pretty Good, but Horribly Slow"

by: CrimsonGear

date: November 20, 2005

The animation and art style was pretty clean, but the voices didn't seem to have any feeling, and the story progression was extremely slow. Though I really didn't find it all that funny, it was otherwise a fairly good video.
My advice for the next one, should you make another one: Try speeding things up a bit, and making the voices a bit more realistic by applying a little more feeling, as well as making sure the voice actors know what they're talking about (people read better when they understand the context,) and also reducing the time between voice clips. Most conversations don't have two-second-or-longer pauses in them.
I look forward to the next one! You've got talent, I'll give you that!

Score: 7

"Quite Entertaining"

by: katashi1987

date: December 5, 2006

It wasn't bad. Quite entertaining. i did feeel the dialogue was a bit iffy but the story was original enough. Good effort.