Score: 7
"Not bad, but missed important things..."
date: December 14, 2005
The concept was great, but the animation was too static, it looked blurred just so you wouldn't be bothered with eye movement and voices. You also spent too much time on the dias and the hall of prophecies, where Harry only goes once in his dreams. Umbridge's black quill does not shred your arm, it cuts the same part of skin, and heals slowly when done. You also cut out some good parts, like Ron getting the Prefect badge and the dementors closing Harry on the street, not to mention that you didn't put the phrase "Order of the Phoenix" anywhere. Music was great though. 7.
Author's Response:
What I put in it is whatI put in it...alsot the arm thing. in teh first detention it heals...after that it doesnt' and goes all over his arm. He shows the scars in the sixth book.