Score: 6
"nice, but needs something more"
date: November 10, 2005
Some nice images here, i like the music, and you do a good job of sort of mimicing a certain sort of movie trailer...at first. At some point the speed needs to pick up a little bit more. Also there a couple images that are too mysterious - the black cloaky thing, what is it anyway?
I liked your fade-out of the eye. In general though, i think more sophisticated animation is needed for this theme. The flat, unmoving characters are like graphic novel or comic drawings, they don't have the capacity to match the tension of the music and the overall trailer format.
Not bad, but I would go back and add more to the animation.
Author's Response:
Thank for the input. I know I have trouble with that aspect and I'm currently trying to correct that. (no necessarily on this movie....on something else that I have to redo thanks to a think called erasing your hardrive because somthing uptaed incorrectly. ><)