Score: 8
"Some stuff u need to consider"
date: November 6, 2005
i liked your toon... very good
let me go into detail... the small bits(lets say the "interactivity")
now, movies dont need to be interactive because all we do is stare at them. but think about the loading screen, no one likes to stare at something that says loading. well i dont. put a loading bar in or something, to show how much has loaded. also when it says play, you have to klik on the letter to actually play, put a box around it(it doesnt need to be a different colour, you can use the same colour as the one in your background to make it look like "play" is just a word on it's own) so u dont have to slowly position your mouse to press a letter on " play"
this goes out to all you other flash artists too.
good job though!