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Score: 8

"::Very funny::"

by: Aci6

date: February 17, 2009

This was done very well, as a sequel to the first one it doesn't do too much differently except throw in some better skits. Jokes are presented in the dialogue mostly but toward the end they start to integrate some animation based jokes such as the last one focusing on a screaming kid.
The animation is a bit jerky, but it goes well with the zany style of art the flash has as its own.

::Overall::
A great improvement from the first, this has less skits but they're a lot more funnier. The voices are done very well for someone using the same voice and just adjusting it to suit the character. Great.

::Aci6::

Score: 10

"LOL"

by: BattleRiflesPwnYou

date: March 5, 2008

Dude, I've been there with the kid. This is classic.

Score: 6

"lol"

by: Cyberdevil

date: January 2, 2008

Another interesting story about the Dan, heh, comical and random, just like the previous ep was. been a pleasure watching. Keep up the great work!

-cd-

Score: 10

"HAHAhahahaah"

by: Flasasasasa

date: January 29, 2006

Maybe I don`t work in a bookstore :P but this is very funny...

I like this kind of humor with the different types of people...(especially the last one,lol) I can compare it with things in my life :P..

Score: 6

"This Is uuuuhh not fantastic"

by: Napstasakul

date: October 21, 2005

Well i don't think that bookstore humor is that hilarious u made a good attempt. the last and 3 installmenst were good but the rest was just "WTF is This Shit and Y am I Watching It?"

Score: 5

"end = death"

by: OutLandish

date: October 19, 2005

you should have made it longer, whenever things are getting funny and then we see all black.. we pray that its not the end, and once it is, if its not long enough, you will hear about it. Its cool to make fun of how bad work can suck but you have to come up with more ideas than just those few people. what else sucks about the bookstore dont you have to clean and shit too? just make it longer with more ideas.

Score: 8

"A wonder let down by direction and sound"

by: mrSimon

date: October 19, 2005

As a checkout operator, I relate to a lot of this stuff, its pritty damn funny. I love the selection of camera angle also, as well as the hand drawn doodle style of the whole thing.

However I really feel this could have been a lot lot better had there'd been more work with sound and direction. The flash is virtually mostly silent, with a few sound effects. Forcably happy "elevator music" like stuff, or perhaps a very quiet shop ambience would have given it a little more depth, without any extra animation work. Story-wise, the flash felt pritty anti-climatic. Whether this is the desired effect or not I dont know, however it would have been awesome if the baby wrestling sketch was the last as the reaction of the bookshop assistant would work as a climax to the flash. The audience relate to the attendant through the toon as he is the only consistent charecter, and to see him avenge his troubles is the highlight of the flash for me, and I'd imagine the audience.

However, these are small worries, and as you can see by the 8 score, I loved this flash. You have probably made the daily five, but if you improve a little, you could be an awesome frontpage artist. Keep at it you.

Score: 10

"that was totally tubular dude"

by: RunBeerRun

date: October 19, 2005

i really liked it, it was the best of times it was the blurst of times

Score: 10

"Never worked in a bookstore"

by: TrioCon

date: October 19, 2005

And never worked in retail or anything, but still I got the jokes!
Hilarious, hope to see more from you!

Score: 10

"Ha ha, Good job"

by: Panzerp00

date: October 19, 2005

That was funny, but believe me, anybody who has ever worked in retail will get the jokes.