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Score: 7

"Not bad"

by: FatefulWanderer

date: March 29, 2009

Thats an alright intro. Now make the rest of the story 2 c how it goes 4 audiences like us

Score: 6

"Good try"

by: The1Danish

date: August 1, 2008

Considering that was your first time I think it was good...
I like the way you decided to make up your own names for the characters.
Keep it up!

Score: 9

"Good"

by: Carcity

date: July 26, 2008

It was good for a first timer. Next time try to make the text when they talk appear slower. I couldn't read it all.

Score: 7

"not good"

by: vali10

date: October 9, 2007

the names are wrong!!!!!!!!!! here are the real names:
frostfire-firzen
dean-dennis
i can vote low this move but i have an light aura so vote 3

Score: 7

"well..."

by: chenk

date: August 14, 2006

For all the dickheads who complained about this frostfire, are completely stupid. It's only a nickname in this movie.
anyway iy needs more fights... that is all

Score: 7

"This is okay, but..."

by: wyrfxrssn

date: July 19, 2006

This flash was ok but it was way to short, had crappy grammer, and not much happened. in other words, it was almost a piece of crap! maybe the next one will be better...

Score: 5

"no man never again"

by: sharknife

date: May 21, 2006

ok first, the guy with the green hair isnt called freezefire, like wtf were u thinking, hes called firzen. i liked it a little because it was based on little fighter. period

Score: 5

"i agree"

by: shy-inuyasha

date: September 11, 2005

you got a good idea on your hands. but you need alot of Improvement. if you want help. Register at The alpha crews forums. just go to my pro click my site and click on the bold words on the page and it'll take you to the Forum

Score: 4

"Decent attempt but you need quite some work"

by: Jonkenden

date: August 26, 2005

I seen worse i say, you could improve it alot by increasing the amount of frames so it becomes smoother. Right now it`s jerky and feels strange to watch, sprites being sprites are decent graphics but why did you use sprites and then custom made backgrounds?

It looks bad when combined unless you are particulary skilled at making your own things, i`d suggest sticking with sprite and sprite backgrounds rather than mixing for now. The fight scenes themselves where very short so they became rather uninteresting, you need some improvements there as well.

Keep working on it

Score: 3

"Grammer is bad."

by: V-Avon

date: August 25, 2005

Work on the grammer. Punctuation. Your backrounds need work. The fight was too fast.